Beyond The Holders
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I'd like some feedback. In the future, chapters will be much more 'fleshed out', with a lot more of A.G.'s thoughts and feelings on certain subjects. it's really how he evolves as a character, and how he sees things when discovering certain secrets, as well. Hope you enjoy the future of Project: PUPPET! -Jude
Sorry would have read it earlier, but I've been busy with so many things. However, this is off to a good start. I really like how you've stylied it, as it does look and feel like a data file of some sort. Keep it up. -Arca
Yeah, it's very Terminator-esque. I like it.
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