Beyond The Holders
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"what what? if youn don't like it/ understand it tell me so i can better my writting"
There are too many grammatical errors to list. There are also many examples of bad wording, like using "wanna" instead of "want to". Also, "You are gons to need them."
A lot of it is just bad writing in general. "What you have done don't have forgiveness." "Your path don't have turning back."
It needs a lot of advising before I can even determine if it's decent enough to read.
If you readed the topic discussion before start to talk shit you would know that i said that i'm not english and my english can be bad, so i said that it would need revising, but probably you don't read nothing and just come here to talk shit.
Really, i accept critics, but "It needs a lot of advising before I can even determine if it's decent enough to read". You can go fuck yourself.
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