Holder of the Rails/Discussion

I think this one needs some work. I find it's pretty long for what it is, plus a lot of things are over explained which ruins a lot of the mystery that the other stories have. I'd be happy to help with revising this story.

Hmm. I dunno. This one I feel like it could be featured, but also maybe not. I'm leaving the tag for now. But I'd like to hear what other people think too. -Arca

It's good, but a little too wall of texty, and the poem is a little much. Gnostalgia (16:51, 30 May 2009)
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