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Legion of Balance/Discussion
I'm really, really liking this series. It's almost as good as Finding the End.
Well done. -- MisterVercetti
Thank you :) -Dallas
I must confess, I was skeptical of this series at first, what with the whole "all-powerful" thing. However, you're pulling it off really well, and it's turning out to be quite excellent. Bravo.
-Edeatsyourface
If you don't like the conversation, just chop off that bit. The hatefilled roar part would be a good conclusion.-Torodugoru
I like the conversation, i just cant think how i can end it Epicer. More Epically*** -Dallas
Expolsions. An expolision makes EVERYTHING epic. Or you could have some twist. Reveal a side effect of immortallity curse ma-gigger. I think Jack would be a little more creative than (and generally not very good at) making people immortal.-Torodugoru
well the twist was that as long as all the men were alive they'd be immortal. Legion wont die cause hes fucking LEGION, Doom couldn't die cause he was a holder. and Michael was the odd man out, he could die, but nobody's killed him yet. -Dallas