The Holder of Joy/Discussion


Wow... I really like this one. Aside from some weirdness in syntax (not to mention there's already a Holder of Joy), this is fantastic. In fact, I'd vote to delete the other Joy in favor of this one, once I edit it a little.
-Edeatsyourface

I agree wholeheartedly for deleting the other Holder of Joy...this is just too awesome for words. -Jude

Oh my yes, this is wonderful. With some syntax corrections like Ed said, and some deletions of the other holder, it will be perfect. In fact, I would possibly recommend it for Featured... -Damascus

I've already done a few corrections, but sadly my writing ability has all but fled me. Nonetheless, I'd second the featured recommendation.
Edeatsyourface
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