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 Post subject: The Balance Saga
PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:35 am 
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Why are these here, they look like they're written by a 14/15 year old. But for real, they could for-sure use some touching up. Maybe even some wide-brushed deletions and definitely rewrites.
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 Post subject: Re: The Balance Saga
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